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May 28th, 2013, 11:46 am

Average Rating: 4.33
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Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 11:50 am

Oh noes!! DDD:>
Sai has lost his sword!! >~<
Danger ahead!! OAO

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Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 10:23 pm

@jade75081: But yes!! O_O
Sai is in some serious trouble!! >~<
Let's hope things don't go too badly!! DDD:

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 10:33 pm

@Akki-Chan: It might get hard to watch, yeah!! D:>
Now Sai is at this guys mercy! >~<
Lawl, that would be a pretty funny thing to see!! XD
Yes, we must now go invent the winged sword!! >:D

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 10:39 pm

@TiaTinyKat: "Flash him"? XD
Like, in the perverted manner!? o3o
Either way the run idea sounds good to me!! O_O
Sai should get away very quickly!! DX

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 10:51 pm

@Itoshii: Lawl, indeed you may! XD
Un, yeah, action and combat scenes are not something I am good at!! O_O
I will definitely continue to try and get it right! P:<
Yeah, I was wondering why the pose looked so off! O.O
Will try to make sure the legs don't remain so locked in the future! :D

Ah, you are right, it's a sword meant for only one hand to be on the hilt :3
But he is using the other hand, it's just not on the hilt or anywhere on the sword P:
Since the guard only covers Sai's fingers he is using his other hand to cup the bottom of the hand holding the sword to steady it :O
Or even just using his left hand to stabilize his forearm and better cushion the blow :3
Either way, it's my mistake for using this angle because you can't see what either hands are doing! XD
Will also work on using better angles for action scene! >w<

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 10:52 pm

@lovelessbutterfly: You seem to be in quite some shock!! O.O
yeah, this is really really terrible!! DX
And I bet you are quite concerned for Sai!! D:>
He is definitely in trouble now ;_;

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 10:58 pm

@snow crystal: Thank you very much!! :D
It's really awesome to hear that the expressions turned out nicely!! >w<
I really worry about them in these types of scenes because it's not the cutesy type things I tend to draw! P:
But yeah, what can Sai do without a weapon!? O.O
Surely he is now in grave peril!! DX

Lawl, we shall see what he does!! :D
But no doubt, whatever he ends up doing, he won't just give up! >:3
Updates coming up soon! >u<

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 11:01 pm

@bluswordgrl: Nope, nope, not good at all!! QAQ
Without his sword things will not be easy in the least!! DX

Ah, I think you are correct! :D
Bent knees and a wider stance are a more stable position which would be better for such scenes! P:
I really have trouble with these kinds of things so don't worry about giving me some advice! :D
Yeah, I think it just looks weird because you don't actually see Sai's hands so it makes it a little confusing at first glance :U
I think he's probably using his left hand to cup his other hand or even brace his forearm to help stabilize the sword :3
It just would have been better if I had a different angle so you could actually see that!! XD
So, will work on that as well! :3

Reply Crimson Chains, May 28th, 2013, 11:05 pm

@Pandamelium: Oh, thank you very much!! O///w//O
I know some of the poses and action transitions can be weird, but I'm happy to hear the general flow and everything is pretty decent! :D
I'm sure that Sai will be rather frustrated by the loss but definitely won't let not having a sword stop his fighting spirit!! >:D

Ahahahaha, we shall see!! XD
Certainly he is no longer in sight! O_O
But who knows what will happen? :O
Sai could try and catch up :3

Next update will be soon, don't worry!! :D
And it will be full of drama or something!! >.>

Reply Crimson Chains, June 3rd, 2013, 10:04 pm

@hushsee: It did!! QAQ
Without that sword what will Sai do!! >~<

Hahaha, sounds like a plan!! :D
If he must fight bare handed he should give it his all! >:U

User's Comments:

Reply jade75081, May 28th, 2013, 12:00 pm

OMG NO!SAIIIIIIIIIIII QAQ

Reply Akki-Chan, May 28th, 2013, 2:06 pm

Nooooo, I can't stand to watch... >.<
*sword grows wings and stabs scary guy in his head/back*

Reply TiaTinyKat, May 28th, 2013, 2:39 pm

Sai flash him and run!

Reply Itoshii, May 28th, 2013, 2:45 pm

If I may,b you might want to work on combat posing. In a sword fight, people don't tend to stand straight legged.
If I may again, it seems like Sai is holding his sword with both hands when it's clearly a sword with room for only one hand on its hilt.

Reply lovelessbutterfly, May 28th, 2013, 3:22 pm

........................................................................................... ........................................................................................... .....................................................................*the collapse of the time/space continueum and reality as we know it*

Reply snow crystal, May 28th, 2013, 4:41 pm

Ah~ expressions~ you drew them so perfectly!! That was the first thing I noticed. Second, of course, was: "Oh NO! The sword, the sword!! What will Sai do now??"

Yeah, well, Crimson, WHAT WILL HE DO NOW??? Update soon! ;)

Reply bluswordgrl, May 28th, 2013, 5:06 pm

Oh Crap! Not good, not good!

Also, um about the poses, it might help if their knees were bent a little and maybe spread out a bit more. As for Sai's two-handed grip, it's fine. I mean he is trying to fend off the heavier sword of a taller opponent.
Hope you don't mind the suggestions, Crimson.

Reply Pandamelium, May 28th, 2013, 6:40 pm

Crimson you are doing SO WELL with this fight scene.
Pssh, Sai may have lost his sword, but I know he's still ready to kick some butt.

Durgess is NOT getting away. Or maybe he is. XD
I don't know.

Can't wait for next update!

Reply Itoshii, May 28th, 2013, 10:15 pm

@bluswordgrl: im sorry, friend, i may need to clarify the issue i have with the sword for good measure.
The way the sword looks to be designed makes it a little impossible to wield two-handed. The grip looks only to be made for one hand and then it has a guard over the fingers, making placing one hand on top of the other. If he were to place his hand over the guard when it's his hand is sweaty, and in this situation it probably is, it's probably not going to help or do much other than slip off the metal and throw him off balance or target.

Reply hushsee, May 31st, 2013, 9:59 pm

OH NO, THE SWORD WENT FLYYINGGG.


oH WELL, TRIP HIM, BUT DODGE FIRST

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