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July 17th, 2012, 2:49 pm

Average Rating: 4.00
You don't know that
Author's Comments:

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 2:53 pm

Sai's gonna continue to argue his point! >:D
yup, you can't let all those people on the ship die!!! D:

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Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 10:30 pm

@Sammy7XD: He really is! XD
Even if he's hurt by Kuragi's words he's still gonna fight this out!! >:D

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 10:47 pm

@Yumimarie: Sai truly is! XD
not afraid to stand up for what he thinks is right >:3

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 10:58 pm

@snow crystal: Hahaha!! XD
I suppose Sai's flaws aren't nearly as prominent at this stage :3
But he does have his faults, his stubbornness being one that is going to play out in the near future! :D
Don't worry, I can understand how he hasn't made as many mistakes or anything as the others but he is far from perfect >w<

Kuragi really is quite foolish with his endeavors!! XD
The plan is quite suicidal! O_O;

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 11:15 pm

@ChocoRess: Sai has a very strong sense of right and wrong! :D
And he's equally as strong in being determined to vocalize his belief!! XD
Yup, Kuragi is being a serious idiot right now!! >:I
This is a suicide mission he has planned...and it could very easily lead to the destruction of the ship!! D:

Un, it's true that Sai is really far from perfect :3
His stubbornness really is going to land him in some hot water in the future >_>;
although one could argue it's getting him in trouble right now! XD
Yup, we'll see what will happen after some more chapters :D
Then we can really see Sai's true colors! >w<

I'm glad that you like the expressions! :D
I dunno why...but for some reason they looked off to me when I was drawing them! O_O;;
So good to know they seem ok! XD

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 11:21 pm

@redleaveshavefallen: I think Sai must go through a lot of paper!! XD
Lawl, Yep, those be some of the supplies that are needed as well!! >w<

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 11:42 pm

@Despicable Dream: Lol, I do think it would be rather interesting to actually try and live with him! XD
Gen certainly has his hands full :3
I do think Sai is far from perfect, but we'll experience more of it later in the story >_>

Ah, there really is difference! :D
Because Sai really isn't perfect but I still think he's a pretty decent character for this story :3

Wah! O_O
You should study!! XD
These stories will still be here after your exams, i promise! >w<

I'm very happy that you like this page so much!! >///<
I think it really does show a lot that Sai was able to stay so strong even when Kuragi said something so thoughtless >:/
Yeah, tuesday is almost over ;_;
but another one is just seven days away! :D

Kuragi is kind of a dick right now...and while he has his good moments he is starting pretty low on the whole "good person" scale! XD
But that just leaves room for more growth which I have planned for the future >_>

Thank you so much!! :'D
I really don't know what to think about my style any more!! >_>;;
I've been drawing too much so it just looks like "meh" to me! XD
Sai's hair is interesting to draw though...so it's great to hear that it looks so good!! :DD
Expressions are always fun! :3
but this page felt weird for expressions for some reason...I'm relieved that maybe it's just my imagination that they look strange!! >_>

Ah! O_O
I absolutely loath backgrounds and so I know they are the least detailed and accurate part of the pages...
But I'm extremely happy that you think the minimalist backgrounds actually suit the story! ;A;
Lol, of course, for Kuragi's cabin all I have to draw is a bed and paneled walls! XD

I'm overjoyed that the narrative seems to be improving!!! TT^TT
I REALLY doubt my writing abilities...seriously...I doubt my art but I'm always confident I can improve...writing, however, I have no idea if I can improve or not!!!! O_O;;
So it's absolutely wonderful to know that it seems I have!! :'D

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 11:44 pm

@KiyaChan: Sai is gonna tell it like it is yo! >:O
Eventually Kuragi will have to see reason! XD

Reply Crimson Chains, July 17th, 2012, 11:46 pm

@Evian: I agree!! :D
Sai's got the guts to stand up for what he thinks is right! >:3

User's Comments:

Reply Sammy7XD, July 17th, 2012, 3:16 pm

Awwwwwwwww sai. your such a good person X3

Reply Yumimarie, July 17th, 2012, 3:20 pm

sai is awesome!

Reply snow crystal (Guest), July 17th, 2012, 4:22 pm

I adore Sai, but he's not as near to me as, for example, Aki. You remember what I wrote under the last "Fallen Angel's Love" page? That mistakes make charcters more alive? I still mean that. Mistakes make them LOVEABLE. It's getting more and more difficult to love Sai because he gets more and more perfect with each page. He is strong, kind, pure and beautiful. On top of that, he had a troubled past... how could he be more perfect?! He's like a diamond, easy to admire from afar; but I would never dare wear him myself.

And well, for that argument... *sigh*... we do have two stubborn characters here, I think... and I still feel Kuragi is acting stupid. You know why. Plans like that can't work out. Again - dumb cap!

Reply ChocoRess, July 17th, 2012, 4:47 pm

Sai is such a determined kid. Even in a tense situation like this, where words are thrown haywire and with heedless care. Kuragi should really take a moment to think things through. Recklessly endangering your crew's life will not help you capture another ship. The less crew members you have, the harder it will be to achieve your goal. And the more he lets die, the less that are still alive will trust him enough to work under him. Soon enough he may have crew leaving because they are afraid, and not just because they're dead.

And not to create conflict or anything, but might I just say that--in response to snow crystal--a troubled past does not make somebody perfect. It adds to their character and provides a suitable background for future events, sure, but it in no way dictates how "perfect" they turn out to be. Besides, we're only in, what, the second chapter of the story? It's still far too early to tell exactly how "perfect" or "imperfect" any character is. There is his stubbornness, for example, that could very well get him killed at any time. It has also never been stated (correct me if I'm wrong though) that Sai is completely and utterly "pure." You have to look at the story from all possible angles and be able to see what may or may not come to be reality in the future. But you also have to be able to realize that, because this is not a story any of us are telling, we are not certain of anything until it's been clearly stated.

The only point I'm trying to make, however, is that it is far too early to say for sure that we know all that much about anyone in this story. No matter what stands out at the moment.

AGAIN, THIS IS JUST MY THINKING. Ignore it and don't take offense to it. Just my thoughts in response to snow crystals. And if I at all sounded rude or accusing (because I've been told many times that I can) I apologize ahead of time.

ALSO. Expressions are beautiful as always. ~<3

Reply redleaveshavefallen, July 17th, 2012, 5:05 pm

He writes so big! Must use up a lot of paper. 'We need to stop at port and grab medical supplies... And paper!'

Reply Despicable Dream, July 17th, 2012, 5:47 pm

Perfect? I'm sorry, but I'm laughing my ass off. He may come off as perfect because we're not living with him, but he reminds me of my little sister (who's almost 16...): too damn stubborn and not willing to listen to others, what's terribly irritating. Half-hearted responses, a lil' bit spoiled, childish, vindictive, and though he can't speak, he can't keep his mouth shut. That's not "perfect" traits, on the contrary! He's a teenager. He'd drive me mad, though I love him as a character.

I agree with @ChocoRess here. And she's right when she says it's too damn early to fully know a character.

There's a difference between beeing perfect as a character and beeing a perfect character.

And I should be studying for my finals, not analyzing your stories...

Moving on. I just don't know what to comment, because I can't found words to describe the awesomeness. I do the same thing as Sai when someone hits me below the belt (seriously, Kuragi? Think before you speak, you're the adult here...). The whole argument is amazing to show off character traits, it's extremely interesting. I'm sad Tuesday is about to end... I want more!

Kuragi's also a really good character. Someone may like him or dislike him as a person, but as a character he's great xP and I found him quite lovable when he's not beeing an ass >,> at least he's got Sai now to shove reality to his face.

I love your drawing and inking style~ Sai's hair is just so... asdfghjkl (can't think of intelligent words right now.) And I've said a million times, but... the expressions! They're priceless.

And something that I keep forgetting to comment: I love your backgrounds! They're usually enough to prevent the reader to wonder where the hell is all happening, but not too much as to distract the attention from the action.

And another something I keep noticing: your narrative was already very good, but it keeps improving! It's particularly stunning when I re-read the whole comics (it's like I'm putting together the puzzle pieces, it's very different from reading the individual update pages xP.)

I'm pretty sure I had something else to say... ugh, it'll come back. And I'll comment again.

Reply KiyaChan, July 17th, 2012, 5:50 pm

Hn, you tell him Sai! Damn it Kuragi listen to reason!

Reply Evian, July 17th, 2012, 8:11 pm

sai your so awesome :D

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