July 3rd, 2012, 7:23 pm

Average Rating: 4.33
What's wrong? D:
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Reply Crimson Chains, July 3rd, 2012, 7:26 pm

Sai's getting right to the point about his concerns! :D

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Reply Crimson Chains, July 3rd, 2012, 10:23 pm

@ChocoRess: It really is interesting how Sai's primary concern is Kuragi :D
perhaps he's already come to care for the rough captain? :O
Well, either way it's good to get to the root of Kuragi's troubles because it is sure to affect the entire ship one way or another >_>;

Good job with the depth, bro! XD
I'm sure that if Kuragi is even going to say something, well specific anyway, it'll take some coercing from Sai >_>

Reply Crimson Chains, July 3rd, 2012, 10:26 pm

@KiyaChan: No beating around the bush! :D
Sai knows he's gotta be direct with the captain! >:D

Reply Crimson Chains, July 9th, 2012, 10:44 pm

@KuroRiya: We'll see her again!! >:D
and there will be more of a direct confrontation >:3
I think Sai could beat her down pretty easily!! XD

Reply Crimson Chains, July 9th, 2012, 10:46 pm

@CX1989XC: I dunno, maybe!! XD
I'm still going with the "this is a made up story and I'm a lazy author so it's a magic notebook" theory >_>;;

Reply Crimson Chains, July 9th, 2012, 10:50 pm

@x-Ace-of-Spades-x: That is indeed part of the problem!! XD
Hopefully Kuragi will have a little more self control so that Gen doesn't go completely ape shit on everyone ._.;;

Reply Crimson Chains, July 9th, 2012, 10:52 pm

@redleaveshavefallen: I'm so glad that you like it!!! :D
Ah, you can blame my laziness for the notebook solution! XD
but as long as it works well I suppose it's all good! >:D
The notebook really saved Sai's ass, literally, with it's magic conversation time traveling powers!! >_>

User's Comments:

Reply ChocoRess, July 3rd, 2012, 8:25 pm

I love that his first concern is about Kuragi; that he's polite enough and a good enough person to be worried about Kuragi's mental state of well being before complaining about the extreme lack of medicine and surplus of dead an dying crew members.

Oh, hey. I said something deep for once. Or, uhm. Y'know what I mean.
Also, Kuragi doesn't seem too willing to say very much. And probably won't, knowing him. < < ;

Reply KiyaChan, July 3rd, 2012, 9:20 pm

Straight to the point XD That's Sai for ya >.<

Reply KuroRiya, July 3rd, 2012, 10:37 pm

Awww, he's not going to bitch fight with the whore? I was so hoping he would... Can I? Ahem... I feel like we'll be seeing her again... Sooner rather than later?

Reply x-Ace-of-Spades-x, July 4th, 2012, 6:00 am

He's wants to fuck you so bad but he knows he's gonna get shit from Gen and that other guy whose-name-I-don't-care-to-remember-cuz-I-play-favorites for it. That's what's wrong.

Reply redleaveshavefallen, July 9th, 2012, 2:57 pm

;w; This one is also really good! I absolutely love how you implemented Sai's muteness with the notebook, and the captian looking back at the older entries... I love this story, I think it's my favorite out of the three you have. Great job!

Reply x-Ace-of-Spades-x, July 29th, 2012, 9:04 pm

@Crimson Chains: Kuragi? Self-control? Are you high?! xD

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