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June 26th, 2012, 3:31 pm

Average Rating: 4.33
Forbidden!! >:I
Author's Comments:

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 3:34 pm

Oh geez...
Gen is totally acting the part of the over-protective parent! XD
But he has good reason to when it involves Kuragi >_>;

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Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:07 pm

@ChocoRess: Either way Gen loses! XD
I feel a bit sad for Gen's hopeless fight D:
But yeah, Sai's gonna go talk with the Captain one way or another! :3

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:10 pm

@Sammy7XD: Papa bear is going into "discipline" mode! XD
But Sai is a rebellious teenager...things are not going to work out very easily ._.;

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:15 pm

@snow crystal: It's true that the only who probably could convince Kuragi of his error would be Sai! :D
so in that case it's best if Sai goes :3
But Papa-Bear Gen is very concerned for his little Sai! >w<
Let's hope Kuragi sees reason and in doing so earns some of Gen's trust in the process :/

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:19 pm

@KiyaChan: Gen's going to go prematurely grey in no time with the way Kuragi and Sai are acting! XD
poor guy already looks rather tired D:

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:25 pm

@Katherine: You would think that Sai would trust his long time friend/caretaker more than the sleazy pirate captain! >_>;
But unfortunately Sai has a little bit of Hero-worship for Kuragi because Kuragi saved him ._.;
he'll just have to learn the hard way that hero's are never what you make of them! D:

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:29 pm

@x-Ace-of-Spades-x: Gen doesn't want to corrupt Sai by telling him what he thinks Kuragi's plans really are >_>;;
But yeah...his argument would be MUCH more effective if he would actually tell Sai why he should stay away from Kuragi! D:

I fear what would become of this world if we actually gave absolute power to children! XD

Reply Crimson Chains, June 26th, 2012, 10:38 pm

@Despicable Dream: Exactly!! XD
With teenagers like Sai you have to use reverse psychology or you'll never get them to do what you want! >:I
Gen has turned out to be a pretty cool character! :D
He's always looking out for Sai...even if Sai doesn't always appreciate it! XD

Thank you! :D
I was actually very proud of myself when I drew that! >w<
Waaaaah!!! ;A;
No way!!!
I'm incredibly happy to hear that it's one of your favorites!!! >///<
Lol, I felt really lazy when I came up with a way to fix Sai's communication problems...but I'm really glad that it's creative after all!! :D
His hand writing is very...curly(?) but fun to do so it's good that it's also very cute! XD

I was worried about changing my icon, so I'm very relieved that you like it so much!! :'D
It's the first time we see all the ukes together :3
Don't worry about being lazy to comment! XD
I'm just happy that you will continue to read this story! :D

User's Comments:

Reply ChocoRess, June 26th, 2012, 3:36 pm

... I would say listen to Gen.
But we all know you won't or that if you do Kuragi will just swoop in and steal you away.
So ... uhm. Good luck with that. xD ;

Reply Sammy7XD, June 26th, 2012, 3:39 pm

His Papa-bear is showing XD

Reply snow crystal (Guest), June 26th, 2012, 3:45 pm

Well I guess Gen knows why he doesn't want to let Sai go, but I want him to go anyways... and I hope the cap will see his stupid desicion and quickly lead the ship to some land where they can get food and water and medicine... oh, well... I don't think he'll do so, but I still hope!

Reply KiyaChan, June 26th, 2012, 3:45 pm

aww, Gen, you worry too much XD

Reply Katherine (Guest), June 26th, 2012, 3:48 pm

Sai, you should listen to Gen for once.... he does raise a very good arguments... And you've been with him for a long time now so you should trust him.... >.>

Reply x-Ace-of-Spades-x, June 26th, 2012, 5:02 pm

Well, Gen does make some very good points, but I think that he's not giving any reasons for forbidding Sai to see Kuragi, so he doesn't understand why his guardian is acting this way which in turn makes him upset and liable to disobey. I mean duh, Parenting 101. And I'm not even a parent.

This is why children should rule the world.

Reply Despicable Dream, June 26th, 2012, 7:00 pm

I laughed when Gen forbid him to see Kuragi. If you want your kid to do something (specially if it acts as a teenager, like Sai is doing [well, he is one]), then forbid it. But I really like Gen, he seems tough but it's a darling when it comes to Sai.

I love the action in the first panel. And as it is my first comment in this story I must say it's one of my all-times favourite and I found really clever the way you solved the dialogues when Sai communicates through writing =) (and I find his handwriting really cute xP.)

And I love your new icon. I meant to say it earlier, but I'm really lazy as to comment when I can't leave something to say ^^U

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